I thought that these didn't really look like fairy lights, the colour was too solid, I also wasn't sure about the layout of the type. I feel that the fairy light imagery could be communicated better.
I made two layers, one with a 0% opacity, then I blended the two to make more of a light effect.
testing out with colours and using the wire, is it needed?
I curved the text slightly so it looked like the fairy lights were hanging up, I'm now not sure about the colour? Something about the overall imagery, I don't know if I like it or not?
Experimenting with perspective of the lights.
I added some wire to help string the type together, however maybe it's the colour that doesn't work? The overall image looks a bit cheap and doesn't communicate the extract of the poem very well.
NO colour?
Overall, even though I spent quite a lot of time on this, and I think the idea is quite good, for some reason I don't really like this as a final print. I think its'
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