I didn't really like any of these first experiments for this quote. I saw a piece of work on 'fffound', that had a transparent circle then type overlaying it. I also was thinking about the context that this design was surrounding, it didn't really make much sense of relate to anything. I wanted to try and link it with the content of the text, so I thought about using the circle as a ball of string. These were some of my outcomes, experimenting with colour/type and layout.
I'm not sure whether the circle should be smaller and not take up too much room, the string looks a little off place when the circle is too big. Also I don't know whether to include the small translation at the bottom or not, it's only purpose really is to balance out the design a bit. Should 'felino' be in a darker colour?
I like the blue, I think it compliments the yellow well. I got rid of the text at the bottom, felt it was a bit unnecessary.
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