Me and Sean had discussed that if there was going to be a flap that secured the packaging together, it would sit around a quarter of the way down on the page. This gave me a rough idea of how much space I had.
I shortened the descriptions because otherwise there would be too much text. I kept the crucial words that described each flavour, as Green and Blacks would've done.
I felt that the ingredients were too long, there was too much text, and I had to get the font size down to 4pt, which would make it very hard to read. Was all of the ingredients needed? Or any at all? For each individual flavour.
I decided that the ingredients weren't completely necessary, the layout sat better and also made all the text actually legible.
However, including allergy information seemed important.
How it would appear on a brown, text an off white colour.
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